man, fuck am i doing?!...lolol
the battles ive saw so far were very detailed, dope writings. This tho. was epic in my opinion because seriously...who wouldve thought to implement the concepts that both of you did....with that picture!
Mike:
i applaud your effort because it was an enjoyable read...but, i think the relationship concept is so common that it's all the same, just put a different way. i dont feel your flow or vocab didnt set you apart from that but i will give you this, the writing was great. It was the most unexpected concept i've seen, in respect to the picture so far. good shit.
Frank:
MJ? Wow man, that was impressive. the structure kinda threw me off but it still read nice, smooth flow. exceptional vocab. i liked the dialogue at the beginning and end, showed exceptional creativity. this was crazy dope, not to mention a topic we can all relate to...micheal jackson.
this was a dope battle, i felt franks verse was the the better verse in all aspects. although, mike did have a solid drop, it just wasn't enough imo...good shit.
vote: Frank
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