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Old 10-12-2013, 06:42 PM   #11
Zen
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breathless- Very nice showing this week. You have a unique way with words. Allot of the lines rolled off of the tongue almost effortlessly because of the alliteration you used. Very nice. Definitely an improvement over your drop last week. I got my eye on you my friend.
Inno- I think this was your best performance so far in this league. Like Lexicon said this picture was tailor made for you man. You brought an excellent piece this week that was poetic, and I loved it. Bravo.

Great battle here, but I think Inno edges it.
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