YDK- The strong point on your verse was your creativity which I honestly didn't notice when I read through the first time. I had to read through the first couple of votes before I saw that and reread it and was more impressed the second time around. The negative of this verse is it was done very simply. Props for creativity though.
Frank- Frank tha Tank is a beast pure and simple. Great story laid out here that was carried on with your trademark flow. You also had nice allusions to cards in your piece. I've seen better from you but this was very well done. Props.
V/Frank
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