so i hate you both for getting this picture, yea. i do.
Once upon a time a lone assassin was born and raised
in a town outside of the norm where violence is based.
Morbid incidents graced its citizens in the face of ignorance,
Our hero's a fast paced throat cutter so it made no difference
Objective, i though you started this piece off very strong and then i got to the probabilities damn slim and the super sharp knife lines and i just felt those two lines stuck out. the vocab and cadence compared to the rest of the piece just made those seem awkward to me.
King Ra,
Cosmic fusion. Descriptions of the universes inner movements.
So artistic, this union. To disconnect? It is useless.
It's enlightenment for us humans, but for the closed mind: darkness, confusion.
^^that was dope. really liked this
til that day arrives, I'd just wish to sit here mesmerized.
Who'd ever thought one could visualize the genius strokes, only for it to come alive!
I felt the sudden rise as soon as I shut my eyes- though I do not sleep.
Van Gough's complex in full effect, my surroundings come to life each time that I speak.
this might be my favorite verse of the week. i think you played to the picture very well and the flow was perfect. small piece but it packed a punch.
both guy brought it but i think king ra edged this one out for me
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