patrown,
the cadence on the whole first verse of your piece was just beautifully executed. i really love the poetic view and writing form. i'm not very good writing that was. im more straightforward i guess. anyways i dug the whole piece although the first verse was my favorite
Certain,
that piece was half homo, lol jk. nah gave me a few lol's though. i really enjoyed the first half of this and then it kinda fell off for me somewhere around her walking in the room and then storming out, felt like i wanted more. it just didn't end well for me.
despite me not exactly agreeing with how the ending laid out i still think i enjoyed certains piece more because it less a little more reader friendly and less "interpret me". both brought it and this is definitely the hardest vote ive made this week. MVGT=Certain
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