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Old 02-15-2013, 01:58 PM   #9
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Mike Wrecka: Good drop on this one. You portrayed a relationship extremely realistic and in a way that made it seem new instead of the same old relationship shit haha. I thought the verse flowed very well because the inner rhymes but on some of the lines I felt that the multis were forced imo. That would have to be the main problem I see with your verse but still good man.
Frank: You took this a completely different direction. Very good creativity on this piece but I hated the way you structured this piece. I know it was mostly for aesthetics but I would rather just read the lines out plain like Mike's lol. But that's the only negative I have of this piece because to me this was fucking dope. Although it seemed a little too much praise to MJ lol, the flow was good as hell and some dope ass multis. Mad props on this.

Two very different styles in two VERY different directions. But I've got to give this to Frank. This shit is gonna go down to the wire though forreal haha. Good battle yall
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