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Originally Posted by Frank
cool schemes. I fucked with the Mutombo line lol Even though shit is stupid old.
Definately free willy schemes - keep at it
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Yeah this was mainly made to sound good. Thanks for peeping it brother.
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Originally Posted by Genocide
This flowed dope.b couple missplaced words you should edit. Re-read and you'll see what I mean.
Ill post though. Neighbor-esk flow/content. Hmmm
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I actually think the flow is fine but you can't see some of the nuances through my writing. Regardless thanks for the feedback.