[Sho Money EMG]

Alright u know what..that was wrong of me to act like that becuz that's what u did to me.. Here's my honest opinion...

I really do think it lacks as far as it's message and some syllables in the multies didn't connect but.... It has alot of potential I can def tell ur a skilled writer... Just need to work on polishing it up a bit, sometimes I felt that I couldn't find the flow cuz of the rhyme scheme.. But honestly u def had some good lines.. Just felt some stuff didn't make sense or maybe just I didn't understand.. This was my fav

I am the seller, the keeper of the message
you should either go to sleep with depressants
or understand the weaker is in my presence
the sweetest of essence...waiting
and I, keep them buried deep in my collection
playing with them til' I deem my impressions
are you ready? or even seasoned to perfection?
I doubt it, branch out then weed out connections...
rooted deep in your mind, leave out direction...
I snap them out from what they were buried in

this was tight just thought the wording was a bit odd.. Keep droppin man and plz next time leave good feed