Jesus Harold Chirst on rubber crutches these are some long ass verses. But with that said lets get to the votes.
dead: Very good drop to showcase yourself for the first week. Literally from the first lines of your verse I was hooked and it only seemed to get better as it went on. Easy read and nice flow and really saw virtually no problems with this piece at all to be honest.
c.d.m: Honestly I gotta give props to you for writing this verse on such a short notice and to be this good. Props man. Now my complaint with your verse was it seemed to me that allot of your lines were long winded which fucked the flow up for me and ruined the story you were trying to portray imo.
All in all I gotta give props to both of you. Great first week from both but I gotta give this to dead man.
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