Breath- by got you had that eminem vibe for some reason stuck in my head just more on the poetic side.. you came with anger yet came about it with your wording where you displayed the right emotions at the right time. idk i just felt you were smart in developing a lead and having one interested in staying focused. i cant say muich really cause it was a wonderful piece.
Innovator- sup broseph been a while my dude but this here was such a scatter show of brilliance but it still inked cohesive creativity. the style you came with was the same as most i had read from you but its an effective approach and i cant knock on anything from you either cause your writing is your writing.... and i felt you wrote the piece to the best of its extent... on your part. the storyline was nice and productive and it evolved as it went on and wasnt stuck.. line for line was fluid and transitioned with consistency from your content and metaphors being creative. props
both came nice honestly.... i liked both approached and both came with a dialect of similiar traits but execution and enjoyment is the key factor for the winner in my eyes.... and i got innovator by a smidgen... thanks for dropping you guys
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