[Spoken]

Clutter came real clean. you had an idea and a thought of how you wanted to have it executed. though i musty say it was pretty fucking fluid to be honest and shit though. the metaphors in the verse and the story was common but the approach you took and wording made it for a really adverse feel.

scripter you are really elevating to be honest from the open mic cyphers but you need to work on structure and how you wanna go about presenting your verse as we cant hear it... we can only read it so we wouldnt know the stop and go areas pretty much even with the break off style you were trying to push for. the creativity was there and the idea but the content left it slacking as far as protruding the storyline to be of something...anything.

thanks for both dropping but i got clutter