02-15-2013, 11:45 AM
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#7
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Senior Member
Join Date: Jan 2013
Posts: 322
Battle Record: 13-19
Champed
- 1-2 Punch League
Rep Power: 4320636
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Utmost vs. Malachi aka Prophet
http://artofbattling.com/forum/showt...p?2063-Malachi
http://artofbattling.com/forum/showt...our-worst-fear
http://artofbattling.com/forum/showt...chi-S9-Collab)
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Where I was : I joined netcees to start working in my craft like in august, when i wrote then i was terrible, flow was off, very lil to no punches or wordplay or metaphors, I was very new to everything and i didnt know what they were to begin with.
Where I am Now: I have improved greatly from where I was in my opinion. My flow is way better and really nice to me. I try to have more punches/wordplay in my (flex) writing played or not. I think I'm getting more creative in writing too. Everything overall is better than my first few writtens.
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from his benchmark
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