i feel u 100%
the set up is ur best friend if u trynna be overly complex or creative, ive had craxy concepts flushed down the tubes cuz people missed em but in search of that middle ground u mentioned i realized if i explained the fuck out of the bar in my set up an partially in the punch it became more clear for readers, an helps u to utilize the set up for its actually purpose any ways, setting the bar up lol, people just think its a filler line, nah set up is crucial imo, at least if u trynna get deep, if u can be crisp an concise while still being harsh more power to ya, god of war can do it, but myself an even nik i feel have similar styles that are more in depth an require deeper narrative
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Originally Posted by DMS
My dad once had like 4 beers at a family reunion, and drove us home better than my mom usually drives.
Not saying being drunk doesn’t mess up you reasoning. I’m turning 20 soon so I haven’t had a drink ever.
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