Nice drop from both..
Inertia, good lines, felt as though u were just throwin words round w/o any real solid structure, setups could have been placed in however your concepts were good, not great. Good flow though.
Pure, seemed poetic more then a typical battle verse (maybe you were aiming for that type of style? ) anyways, u cleanly executed ur setups, but closers werent that great imo. Good punches, enough to take this.
V/ Pure.
Good job guys.
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