This was way above norm stuff for a freeverse. Very deliberate, and so much so that I
think if you actually spent time you would blow allota ppl's shit way out the water. This
was excellent for what you stated it was. The only real flaw to it imo, was how the rhyme
scheme transitions in the first have didn't happen smoothly enough for a seemless read
throughout. Other than that, pretty solid and intelligent work. Props...
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