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Old 10-09-2013, 11:31 PM   #8
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Originally Posted by dull boy View Post
Tell them what you really think, though.
lmao right


yo i was feelin this a lot. interesting approach. totally dif styles but it helped in the balance of things. opening verse grabbed my attention immediately, flowing right from the picture provided. descriptive. liked the italics part

as for vulgar, always killin it, always deep and thought-provoking. i dont know how you sort through so many concepts in your head and are able to put all that detail into one verse, it always amazes me. and like cake's opening verse, i dug the 2nd part of yours the best-- the ending. keep droppin shit like this, i'd like to hear this in audio if possible

dont know why this was slept on
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Judging from those pics and the state you're in I've concluded with the fact that the world needs more Bodeys.
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