[Dominate]

Originally Posted by Trag.

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I'll stab ya oldest living, this blade'll show em' harm
Display his family crest in front of him and really watch blood coat his arms.
nice, very creative
Your names ironic tho, I bet true life shook this bitch
Last girl who wanted to unfuck the situation... split his money & took the kids.
eh, it's OK
And ya rican battle? it showed off the leagues worse offering..
you winning was the lesser of two evils, voters wanna opt for a third party.
the personal and 'lesser of 2 evils' set up were good, but the flip was boring
faggot, italics & underlining ya wordplay is certainly crap...
if that's dressing up ya punches? then it's no wonder why ya verse is a drag.
heh, cool
It'll be a massacre on news the way u got manhandled
you'll get the sandy hook treatment- a beach bully punchin u for makin sandcastles.
good
I beat Des last week. old age. dont mend the truth
But i find it funny des is closing in on death & death will close this thread on u.
ehhhh it's OK

vs

Originally Posted by Death

unfukwitable's verse


you wouldn't have heated riddles if you stirred upped Dr. Seuss
which is why I Got this pussy in czech.. & I never had a Europe prostitue
okay... pussy and czech are both old wp's but combined and flipped like this it was an OK attempt
He don't pan statement's vicious, this battle'll make fam play submissive
cause for him to have the edge on common grounds- means he's in the landscaping business
good wp, well done... just needed to set up the 'common grounds' part a bit more in the 1st line
I reject lames and leave the rest slay'n so since Trag wanna test flames
I got a home for'em with a "tomb in it"... that shit'll remind girls of his sex game
haha cool. worded nicely
His plan was to leave me wasted, But Instead you will suffer
as viewers mistake this for the PBA- when bold strikes leave this pin head in the gutta
very good. again though, set up your punch in the first line - why is he a pin head?
catch me in a living-room near you, I'll be at yo bitch spot
As he Busts open the door I'm all on his ratchet racks like a Ghetto thrift shop
OK
I seen what Neighbor did to him & he won't last this fight
I'll pour gasoline on him & toss a match.. you'll really see a "Tragic night"
nice wp.... again you can make the punch stronger by setting it up - what was the "tragic night" about?

100x better than your last verse. Def got potential. Ima be watching :)



really quite close but after reading again I'll edge it to Trag for being more creative and having a little more polish

good battle

v/ Trag