ill ether both ya faggots n put a pepper to both these Mans feet,
Ill give u the type of loss thatll make u pull a Ill Nik A & Start bitching about Voting all damn week.
Ill spray scorching take both ya sluts make em walk crooked thru the days hurting
Plus I realized ya love connection is so suicidal that ya faggots could remake the endin on Romeo & Juliet' The gay version.
Ya both the Lamest guys love ridding wood heres were i make ya Patience cry,
Trust me cuz ya have a nose grind on the pole that could break high score records in subway surfer nation wide.
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this battles a Gamble for life & the Bookies dont give a dam if ur cheap
if the Bedding ever goes in ur favor, its just Arguement W/ Ur Man For The Sheets
Ricans a fat kid whos stomach plays a great Role & he's a known actor
people never Count on you Cunt, cause when you post, you leave out the 'O' factor
you try to Ri-use great flips, this fuckin' radio host keeps playin' them out
Cashius something you'll never be able to handle ur better off opening a Savings Account
Interesting battle. Don't really feel like discussing every line. Thought Phuck got this pretty convincingly. Rican's lines are too long. Need to shorten them shits up. Clarity was very bad in lots of places. Just not making sense. I don't really know what to say about that. Seems like English isn't your first language or you have a mental disability. No idea. Wording also needs work. You seem like you read a lot of Orc verses, but you're doing it wrong. Subway surfing nation wide? What the hell is subway surfing anyway? Nose grind came out of no where. Set that up. Open sandals wasn't really a diss. Didn't hit hard. Linking needs work, too. Screen didn't belong in closer. Makes no sense. Idk. Work on everything I guess. First thing I'd do is just make sense, though. Make sure your lines make sense and then expand on them from there. Phuck's verse was pretty clean and creative. He seems like a promising prospect. Not bad at all. Props to both.
/v phuck yew
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