hahah, the feed in here..
I feel like there's a couple grammatical disconnects between your line ends and end starts. like, is each end line supposed to be a full stop? cos sometimes you use punctuation at the end.
don't see the Black D comparison, the progression is different. stream of consciousness vs. free association, maybe?
i dont have enough battery life to break down the meaning much. sorry chief. go collab with people srs. You and oXus on a cypher style collab would be lyrical assassination. or poetic.
cool. keep keyin hM.
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