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Old 10-09-2013, 06:54 PM   #8
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This wad cool my bad for getting at it late
the storyline is great you remind me of a guy I played ball with
seems like something he would do due to Rose's inspirations
it kept moving in the right direction lightly focused on parts to keep it moving
edged it out with the quotes good thing Rose don't rap
he could take the road like Shaq....nice piece breh
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