Wording was an issue for Rican, IMO. He stretched a lot of it out and it just felt like a run-on sentence. The Ill punch was ok, but again, stretched. The sandals outside the door was pretty cool too. But to me, Phuck had better punches. The wordplay on Rican was pretty good as was namesake. I liked the first line and Cashius line as well. Phuck had better wording and the punches hit harder for me. V/Phuck
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