i think your transitions impute a fluid cerebration. that said, there's still something a bit broken thus unpredictable about your style... i contradicted myself a bit.
you've got a good thing going. the way you colour phrasings/ideas with subtle tropes or more obvious articulations. not sure if it's purposeful or polished to a second nature. i like your nuance, basically. almost makes me want to write more.
thanks.
@
Matriarch (in case you don't see this)
add. we should breed. for the sake of science. or perhaps tessellate.