Trag I liked ur opener. Pretty clever graphic shit. In fuck the situation was tight. The third party punch was nice too but offering n party don't rhyme. Dressing up ya punches was pretty nice as well. I don't get the sandy hook reference other than the obvious where the punch comes in. Closer was alright.
Unfuck opener was ok. Next couplet was ehh. Tomb in it was actually pretty dope hahamade me laugh. Pba was okish. N the rest kinda fell off. Closer was almost nice but I don't like the way u delivered it. This battle was kinda close but kinda not. I really liked the tomb in it wordplay I think it was the most creative of the battle but it wasn't enough. Trag was more polished n came across more witty. Vote trag
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