Mael had periods amount to nothing which was worded ok but not real hard. I thought helmets cuda been hella dope but the punch shuda been waayy harder. Miley bars didn't rhyme n down in history is hella played. U seem like u got the jest of how or write punches id just suggest u check out how the more successful battlers word their shit on this site n follow suit. Pretty ok verse tho.
Cash had dip in the night that was pretty tight. Opener was ok but didn't rhyme. Village ppl was worded ok; shuda been "only way u cud" instead. Socialize n layman didn't work for me either. N layman hasn't been used for awhile but still kinda played. Pretty nice verse overall.
I got cash here by a little. I think he had two nice punches that connected where maels wording kinda fucked him.
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