appreciate all the feeding folks. Felt like malachi came really creatively and cohesively. really enjoyed his verse
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Split it's my girlfriend's favorite show... I don't watch much tv but we watched some of that a little while before I wrote this
and for the record, I'm more than fine with any negative feedback, I tried just going stream of thought-y here, which I never did anything like before. I know the verse has elements ripe for critiquing, so if anyone feels so inclined, I'll gladly hear it.