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Old 10-08-2013, 03:59 PM   #10
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The last line from Mael could have been a real nice punch, but it was worded terribly.

With that said, I didn't think much from Mael stuck out, to be honest. Half of it barely rhymed and it didn't flow that well. Cash didn't have much I thought was great, either, honestly. His first last was okay, and the last line was pretty cool though. V/Cash
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