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Old 10-08-2013, 03:36 PM   #14
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fuckin sucks this piece got no showed.
you murdered it.
but doesnt that always happen tho.

anyway...

my favorite bars

Who only spoke braile in the carpet because his eyes were welped and tarnished,
Overwhelmed, he felt disheartened surrounded by hell and carnage,
Artillery shells and carcusses covered the well of heartless,

great use of multis
loved the rhyme scheme
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