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Old 02-14-2013, 12:18 PM   #8
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First off let me say this was a good battle yall. I had to go back and reread this shit twice before I made my decision so here we go.
Innovator: The first part of your verse was my favorite part of your drop and I think you captured the picture there perfectly. Your whole piece had great imagery throughout and even though your rhyme schemes weren't over the top and exciting, it made it work. Props for that.
Rawn MacDon: Your rhyme scheme on the other hand was very over the top and that's the style I like escpecially the to vote to live line. All in all I'd say a very good drop with a nice flow throughout with a great rhyme scheme.

So let me say again how hard this is, but I've gotta give this to Innovator because I feel he captured the image much better. But a very good showing for both. Props to both of you.
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