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Old 02-14-2013, 11:41 AM   #14
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this was dope man. it was an interesting mix of braggadocio rhyme with elegant writing. It worked somehow.
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The rat-a-tat torment of tapping the door of the mansion
Absorbing the blackness of magic too pure to imagine
^^was that an Edgar Allen Poe allusion? if it was...very nice man. flow was bananas. it was simply an enjoyable piece that kept getting better with every read. High level lyricism here. look forward to session 4. word.
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