.... Acting like the big bully.. He gained a reputation giving speeches off false reasons to doubt me.
But thats when u got ur ass ethered for tryna push Meth around, see.. U ended up like Walter White in the season finale...
^way too wordy. concept itself wasn't bad, but fuck u for spoilers. anyways, this coulda been real good if u'd been more concise w/ the wording. as is, it was still aight.
.... It would b in ur best interest if U don't continue this thing we call beef, kid - be more vegan.
Keep acting tough & next you'll end up fucking dropped cuz of ur attitude - this fraud treated like Josh Freeman...
^again. too wordy. cut all the unnecessary slack. u have so many unneeded words in there. concept wasn't bad again. but pls just say 'keep acting tough & u'll get dropped for ur attitude worse than josh freeman' or something. i know that wasn't a perfect flip, but urs is just way too hard too read. decent line overall
.... Always runnin ya damn mouth, I dare u to swing if u dare to stand in the ring.
Bagsy knows that hes just a faggot known for being High & Bi - just ask Karaoke what song Anthony sings.
^okay, this is a def a trend and u def need to work on ur wording. concept was kinda outta the blue. shoulda mentioned the high and bi things in ur setup.
.... This lame bitch is corny an frail, watch how his history repeats itself when Bourne on your trail.
Launch a Aero through ur heart - it's pure Domination that u facing when the outcome is identical to that Tag Tourny u failed...
^yea aite. concept's fine. wording is...okay, i guess. decent line
.... Still wonder how hes considered a vet. You'll live to regret after this. As for ur life? I wish u the best.
It aint me fantasizing. When I set this MAN ON FIRE, its only right I Mark Anthony for imminent death...
^i just did a mark anthony for death line on him. so this doesn't hit at all for me
.... & this what u get. Bags is a fucking bitch an only worthy for, preparing my turkey sauce.
We could play quick & the dead - talking out his ass - listen how full of shit he is, when Dirty draws...
^oookay. concept not bad. wording kinda worked here too. aite
.... No mercy for his worthless verse it's soft an honestly yo ur big caps just lacks in confidence bro.
Always making an ass out of yaself. So stealing his life is less of a job than Robin Thick hoes - this more like Miley exposed...
^woah, this was all over the place. i get the wordplay and the concept's there, and it's creative, but this was just too messy.
.... So I fucking bitch slap this riding dick trash. With a plan to kidnap this lame gimmick.
Tie ur bitch ass to the chair & make u sit with me so I don't have to eat alone this year for Thanksgiving...
^nahhh. this hurt urself more than him
vs.
Its mad strange u saw that wreck as a ticket to the fastlane
U spit at their crosses on the road to success JUST to get ya track played
^hmm. story didn't read like that at all.
This is the end yo. U think i give a fuck about ur friends bro?
Im damon waynes w/razor blades.... carving FAGGOT on their headstone
^lol okay
U gettin amped as shit & thats swell...but stop kiddin yaself
pump ya brakes or that drive'll be the end of u.....just ask tim & danielle
^okay
Ur drug past is dark. gettin clean is easy for a man w/heart
But fam goddamn its hard when u bang more junk then a salvage yard
^aite. personal hit
swag an flow? Wack. But i kno why this kid so hype an shit
Them childish lines go straight to ur head....you snortin flinstone vitamins
^aite
Im swimmin in bitches my breast stroke hurtin these hoes
His first breast stroke was followed by carving the rest of the turkey alone
^haha
Shit is sad. This kids a fag. U introduce ya trick to bags..?
Ill hit the skag an she'll skip the rag. Have ya bitch late like a strikta mag
^dece
Tryed to get the battle on sum swag shit....dude wats next?
U wanna pick a different trade? OK. Trade places with ur two dead friends
^harsh. hit becuz of that
so yea. gamble coulda won this tbh. he had some nice concepts, but his wording killed them. it's a shame tbh, cuz this woulda been a real close and good battle, if he had had better wording. i could even see myself giving it to him. buuut gamble didn't have good wording and that cost him. bags had more hits becuz of that, and they hit harder. so yea, i got bags here. but plz gamble fix up ur wording, cuz ur concepts ain't bad at all. still,
v/bags
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