I was literally writing my vote and i was two sentences away from completing it when it got erased. FUCK!. This will be the shortened version... pardon my short fuse.
NYC: High Points- Concept, flow, consistency overall, affected emotion and really drew in the reader, well crafted intro-body-closer layout. Superb.
Low Points- Off-topic
Vulgar: High Points- Concept, very involved story, good twists and turns, decent job at involving the reader, great utilization of topic. Well done.
Low Points- rhyme scheme a little less consistent and impressive than i'd like, a few detail inconsistencies(i.e. the shooting).
For me, this had to come down to a lasting impression. I liked both, but I had to go with my gut on this. Thank you guys for the great showing. Once again, sorry for the slimmed down vote.
NYC
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