yea u guys do have a pretty similar style
Breathless - There were some cool ideas in this piece. The mean to an end line was a cool one. The issue i had was clarity. I was never sure what was being discussed. The tone was a bit too preachy for me but, i suppose with a topic like that, it's hard NOT to be a bit preachy lol.
Mr. J - While i dug some of the wordplay, some were just corny (if u don't mind my saying)
got me gassed up, regular unleaded, and now it has my brain burstin'
^^like that right there lol. But i thought ur piece was a little more coherent than ur opponent. It was still preachy in some areas but it was definitely a bit more fleshed out than ur opponent.
Vote - Mr. J - it was actually pretty even but Mr. J seem to put more effort into constructing an overall piece while Breathless was almost TOO occupied with clever lines, imo.
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