Vividlyvague - Never read anything by you before, this was a frenetically attentive piece. You gained a lot of momentum with your style of constantly peppering with wordplay, and the humorous Miley Cyrus approach didn't hurt. I refuse to watch her performance but I've seen the pictures popping up on random search engines. You seem like you are a natural with the flow. Nice work.
YDK - Good verse man, I enjoy reading these honest takes on themes. It was hot and cold in the beginning but towards the end you didn't get winded and made a successful outro with that last bar: good stuff.
My vote goes to Vivid.
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