des gets mad ladies, & I use that fact to motivate me
but if Alameda bitch, it'd be a tranny on that LA street
I mean ur gay as fuck, des is not & I often thank god
u don't have to sue the MLB to see guys giving up money for A-rod
vs
I have 3sums all the time, finger bangin witout any effort tim
faggot ur idea of fingering a row of pinks rubbin polident before puttin ur dentures in
U put ur heart into ur verse, but trag knockd ur jaw all over
Tried to Ice-T, but ended up a murdered victem on a special edtion of law & order
ur hooked up to life support, slip of the tounge got u mangled wrong
Faggot it only took one accident to put u on air quicker than gambles song
Straight battle. Wasn't feeling Tyson opener. Connection is too vague. Alameda seems kind of forced, but I'll let it slide. Good nameplay concept otherwise. A-Rod is good, but I don't really like it because you're saying men pay money to have sex with him. Would be better the other way around. And you shouldn't be thanking God for something you're in control of. No one is born gay. REM was similar to the opener. Too vague. Can't quote Kars as Kar/car is really played by now on both Karp and Karaoke. Didn't put any kind of fresh spin on it either. Not only that, but Kar never really worked for Karaoke because it's pronounced care for him. Use care lines instead next time. Allen had his opener which was pretty good. Haven't seen it before. TD was a decent concept even though it's a double initial play, but didn't like the wording of it both ways. The other way it sounds off: "You couldn't catch Tragic, Destroyer... worse than the Giant's receivers in the last two games." Should of linked the punch and punchline with something other than 'worse.' 'Like' would of been better, for instance. Ice T was cool. That show is pretty dope. I didn't know Dhalsim was pronounced like that, but I'll take your word for it. I just realized it doesn't work, though. Des has posted up pics of his fiance (or wife now? Congrats?) and she is pretty petite/slender. I'd be fine with conjecture if it was someone who hasn't posted up a pic of their womans, like Victor for instance. Closer was pretty good. Kind of like that better thann most of Bags' Gamble lines, TBH. Overall, this was a pretty close battle and could probably go the other way based on preference, but I thought Allen Knight edged it out with one more quotable. Definitely not the best showing from either, though. Either way, I enjoyed the reads. Props to both.
/v allen knight
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