I got King winning this one but it was close as shit
Both took a completely different routes and both were extremely enjoyable with superb writing. Pancake, your entire verse had mounds of emotion, I could see the sad man reading the letter with tears and shit. The one part I didn't like was the Drink, sink rhyme scheme. That was mad simple and just was overshadowed by everything else. king, dope description. I could see the hero, looked like the chick from kick ass with different hair. I think you used the topic a bit better as yours was clearly about winning where Cake's was winning in the end but really about remorse and guilt and hurt.
Dope battle
King by a centimeter.
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