[Adonis]

B - So i enjoyed the aspect of traditional topical, not a storyline just an oldschool topical. Although I wasn't a huge fan of the writing to be honest. There were a couple good lines, but for the most part I read it twice and will literally not remember a word that was said. Sorry.

J - Good flow, loved the flow and concept of the gym floor and soul searchin bar. Played the topic well and felt some emotion. Not your best work, but not horrible

V/ Mr. J with a slightly better flow and more emotion.