[Mike Wrecka]

cool battle guys. very tough to vote on.

zenland - ok cool story. nothing mind blowing though. lacked character development, and was pretty brief. was pretty straight forward. what you did have working for you though was the comedy aspect. which I very rarely see in a league like this. it just seemed way too short. and your rhyming mechanics in the first quarter of the verse were lacking tbh. overall though the verse made me smile.

innovator - this was pretty much the best ive seen you come as far as mechanics go. problem is you didn't nail the topic imo. which is ok if you are just using it as a reference point but the verse was a little preachy and didn't necessarily go anywhere. its a shame to because I feel like you made a leap this week with your structure and vocab. your consistently improving. which is the goal

overall - its a hard battle to vote on because zen brought a somewhat sloppy and lazy verse. it was easy to write, but it captured the topic and told a humorous story. inno brought the structure and vocab and wrote a more difficult verse that seemed to sputter along at points. im going off of enjoyment.

vote - zen