[Mike Wrecka]

holy shit fuck wow guys . this battle lived up to the hype. what an incredible battle. top five ive read in my life.

nyc - insane verse. like you could sell that verse somewhere good. i loved it. making a tree the main character and personifying the tree was an awesome idea. it worked brilliantly. and then adding the character sam to the mix was great. i like how they bonded. it felt genuine. ive often wondered what its like to be a tree lmao. but you brought that to life. ok on to the mechanics, they were very good. next level good. you have a strong use of multis, which I enjoy. i love multis and you used them well here. good vocab. great verse.

vulgar - ok after i read nycs i thought it was unbeatable here. but vulgar man you brought it. that verse was also a complex story involving a lot of emotions. it was the usual vulgar verse. it was better imo. i loved it tbh. the angel and devil on the shoulder concept is not a new one but i have never seen it done this well. the rhyme schemes were advanced and smooth. im impressed. one thing i didn't like was the very ending. i was like happy that the guy was going to get a second chance and live a happy life but instead he is going to fuck it up again. that might have a purpose and i see it, like we are bound to make the same or similar mistakes over and over again but it took away that happy emotional vibe that you had implanted in my sub conscious. and for that i didn't like it .


sick battle guys. real hard to vote. props to vote . thanks for the reads and i genuinely mean that.

vote - NYC

liked it as a whole just a tad better