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Old 10-05-2013, 05:01 PM   #7
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NYC- Wow, just wow. Good drop here my friend. The story of this was excellent and it never slowed down but kept building and building until the end. Very nice. The strongest point of this was the flow. Without that flow to carry along this story it would have fell apart. Overall this was a great showing.
Vulgar- Fuuuuuuck. This was a crazy ass story right here. I agree with breathless the constant use of Abe over and over got repetitive but that was no big deal to me because you had to use it. This piece here though is probably my favorite thing I've ever read from you. Seriously this shit is dope. Well done.

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