You're the most active writer on this board, and sometimes it gets tough to keep up with everything you produce. But you're usually worth a read because you have a good wit and understanding of rhyme schemes and word choice. This felt like one of your quicker writtens, but there were some fun one-liners and turns of phrase: "fly by weakened," "Australian coffee" and "do it with science."
The unifying theme seemed to be the (lack of) importance of formal education, but that wasn't too strong. That's not really the point here, though. It's nice to see you writing tighter in the Art of Writing League, but these pieces also are fun from time to time.
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