[Sho Money EMG]

This was pretty good. I think the main storyline was a cool idea but a bit lifeless at times. Some of it kinda wasn't appealing but u also had some good lines. Alot of good multies and also I liked the vocabulary aswell. I think u should work alittle more on counting the syllables of the words u choose to rhyme cuz a few were off. But other than that u got alot of potential and def are a beast. Keep droppin this was tight.

To a rock now deemed to teem with life in the perfect position,
Circular suspensions align to supply vertical dimensions,
And plants arrive confined to a fertile existence
That flies by in a merciful sentence,
The he seas the sea of light retrieve and ignite a herbal incense
That causes the rock to swirl and spin winds creating terminal tensions
Til it quakes and slides and breaks and widens
To form lakes and islands that create the horizon
^^ this was my favorite part, tight shit