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NYCSPITZ · 10-04-2013, 09:14 PM

I liked both verses and it was hard to decide imo. I liked the peaks of breathless' more than the best portions of Mr.J's but felt Mr.J had a better story and cut to the chase in a manner that allowed me to connect better to the subject matter. Cool battle thanks for writing.

V/ Mr. J

10-04-2013, 09:14 PM	#8
NYCSPITZ SYRACUSE Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,031 Battle Record: 31-37 Champed - Write Night II - Alias Topical Tournament Rep Power: 4743547	I liked both verses and it was hard to decide imo. I liked the peaks of breathless' more than the best portions of Mr.J's but felt Mr.J had a better story and cut to the chase in a manner that allowed me to connect better to the subject matter. Cool battle thanks for writing. V/ Mr. J