damn this was a great battle, both of you came correct
and both of you brought a great aspect to the quote for the week
I'm digging the vibe both brought along with their pieces
Vivid-You did an amazing job, you seemed to pick up a lot of ideas since starting
your writing mechanics really shine through and show some progress
you did very acceptional as far as multi's go and the flow of your piece
it never seemed to let up
YDK-You also did an amazing job, you incorporated a different aspect
which makes the battle seem more worthwhile, the flow of the piece was nice
and your style compliments the quote to a certain degree..although..
i do know you had some trouble coming up with the piece beforehand
it seems like you knew what to go for...
As far as my vote go, it's a tough decision, both of you came correct
you attacked the subject like any writer could and...added personal flare
when it comes down to it, it's not about who did the quote the best...
it's based on who wrote it to their personal style, it's what seperates us
both pieces are unique because of that, and have had quite the effect
personally I feel vivid has wow'd me this week...so my vote goes to him
v/Vivid
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