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Old 10-04-2013, 02:08 AM   #2
Frank
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First verse was very stirring, superbly sensational story telling,, the emotion remained true on the second read ,, good all around projection. . The projector showed your verse on the side of a bamboo house in some remote village ,, everybody sipped hot tea burning their mouths shouting "hot fiyah!!!!" That was a good verse , cake. . About time

Second verse followed capitalizing and going off on a terrific tangent, , the rebellion mach 1 free bird spirit read like an uprising of social commentary directed at the ozone of bozos ruling this planet...

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