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Old 10-03-2013, 12:45 PM   #7
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Someone is foaming because he gets no love
poor lost soul...




regardless this was quite the piece had a nice flow to it
the vibe is familiar to me. Either way I believe you understand what you are going for
and this shines a bit of light on what is yet to come. Nice drop
keep writing
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