[Sho Money EMG]

This was pretty cool. Kinda basic at the start but gradually gained more interest. Had a good structure and flow, also thought the schemes were cool. Cool topic, stayed on point thuroughly. Not a bad drop, keep em coming.

My fav lines were

new advanced techniques, Jay felt stupid after
his movement faster, soon the student was master
his down-range target shootin was next to blow
perfected his wind reading an breath control
3 second delay, then shit see he uh believer
.405 hit a coffee can from sixteen hundred meters

^^ not bad, stay up