I'm fuckin ya bitch to Robin Thicke while she's grabbin my balls
So if you see any 'Blurred Lines'.. I hope you're drunk driving & crash thru a wall
^hmm. connection was kinda off. like if u're listening to blurred lines, why would he SEE it? that threw me off
He wanted to keep this one short, knowin I'm better w/ mines
But even if Bicentennial still be usin concepts that date back to that era in time
^this was a fresh wp that worked well. good line.
You been in the closet for years.. ain't no fuckin way I'm jokin
Forget the Metro card.. your main platform's hittin rails & runnin trains on Token
^seen this wp too many times before. flip was good, but concept felt too familiar
We could argue my HOF spot, talk losses.. I'm jus' keepin it rap
I know it's like splitting hairs, but this fag's gotta Paul Mitchell treatment for that
^haha. cool
You trained w/ Sam Stout, but I'ma make our differences known
Only time you got 'Hands of Stone' in ya corner's playin rock-paper-scissors alone
^ha, decent
Ya girl's head's mentally ill.. she fucks w/ me for the sexual thrill
After this, Blue dolphin a open her mouth & swallow like she's poppin ecstasy pills
^yup
You tagged w/ James.. he can tag you @ the hospital in'a sheet
I give a fuck who Beirut for when I show up & turn your block to the Middle East
^i thiiiink i've seen it before. i'm not sure tho, so i'mma say it's fresh. good line.
Pussy.. you idolize Pauly D, sunbeds, tight denim & perfect brows
If this faggot gets any Tannehill be on his back, fittin right in w/ the Jersey crowd
^judging from blue's pics, this seems to be true. line was solid overall
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remember Fight Night XXV?! i dropped 12 & this dude was ended
my gawd. he Tanked in the Ship so quick i swore it was a scuba lesson
^liked the wording here. solid opener
week 1 was a joke. be honest neigh, you looked shook w/ the pen
how ironic. Tragic lost on a Wine Bar & that's where u spend Friday's lookin for men
^not bad. connection not too strong, but the line is aight
please run the league again. ur hipster & really wack clown
& i got no problem 'taken down A Mod. B.' .. 'specially one w/ such an Indy Back Ground
^tried googling this, didn't find anything. don't get it at all. sorry
bitch i'm Shotgun savvy so u better start to fuckin beg fam
or u'll get 'Held Up, w/ the Pump in ya Mouth' & i ain't talkin Keg Stands
^liked this
Ms. Briggs been riding my shaft cuz this fakes square as hell..
plus i Hershey's leavin you for me.. but don't worry homie, i'ma take Caramel
^thought this was pronounced her shees not hear shees. if u meant heard, it's kiiiinda forced. also, didn't know his girl was called mel briggs. but damn. this woulda been such a dope line. like the double wordplay with close to perfect wording... i still like it, but it's not as impactful as it coulda been
this guy's broke as fuck. that wallet doesn't give this bitch a chance
so if ur lookin for Bordeaux... hit up Contiki tours & book a trip to France
^simple. hit.
lmao at ur diet. the pics ur postin make Rawnny look tough
be honest. ur only Pale Diet involves puking into one cuz ur scrawny as fuck
^good wording again. solid line
so call me rusty, outta sync.. start talkin rash n swear
but you'll be out a sync too.. once i let your head up for one last gasp of air
^solid closer.
so this was really good. botw for me so far (haven't read dom/bey and a cpl others tho). idk. it's hella close. both had one miss and one not so good line. rest was good. man. i feel like neigh had slightly fresher wp's. but blue's wording was harsher. i think blue just hit harder to me. his wording didn't seem rusty at all and really helped the impact of his lines. i think that tips the scale for me. i really don't wanna vote against neigh here tho, cuz he came dope. no losers in this one. props to both forreal. well worth the read.
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