father time been kickin ur ass lately, now ur moment is done.
If classic means old & timeless ur every Mozart masterpiece rolled into one.
^aite, not bad
I'm up on secret societies. s'why this redneck deserved his losses.
Cuz i saw the clandestine operation...n it involved white sheets & burnin crosses.
^fresh. like it
U say ur girl hates. where u compensate for lack of certain traits.
everytime she goes down n sees despair it mirrors that EXACT look on her face.
^haha good
& up in the club makin her ass twerk. while u thinkin' she's perfect.
But shit, she got that move down to a t...since there's virtually nothin to werk with.
^aite, not my style tho
ya hearings going, ya vision sucks and on medicare payment plans.
Des throw hands? only time u say 'take the gloves off' is for ur prostate exam.
^wouldn't it be 'put on gloves'? that threw me off. was dece otherwise
i made ya wife ratchet... talks cheap. she's top 1% at a swap meet.
we raw beat... march up with my angry mob that'll turn the pussy wall street.
^yup
Seen ya battle vs hotdog, u lost even tho he aint posted in years.
must be like ur life sellin phones becuz u stayed behind a vendor most ur career.
^solid close
vs.
fuck this asian faggot... des throws death blows, u can't handle me
u got killed with neighbor's key like a stalker lied & said he was family
^yea, okay
I'm a killer so I walk the streets in a haze of medical, hoes & cocaine
meanwhile, u walk to the buffet & refill trays of general tso's & lo-mein
^was funny, but really simple. like the whole connection was that u walk this way while he walks that way.
I know u tried mad hard but against des it's just futile u wack tard
when u lose, we'll probably see a great wall, oh wait.. that's just in ur backyard
^not bad. wording coulda been a bit harsher. solid line
this fag tries clownin my job? I'm breakin both of his limbs..
cuz after I give 'em this work, y'all never gonna see T-Mobile again
^this was good. best line of ur verse so far
the way I Bruce Lee these hoes, they all think des is their destiny
while ur one-inch punch is just what ur girl calls ur sex technique
actin all tough while ur unknown- this kid's a asshole
ur just a second-rate resin tryin to act loud - strikta's glass bowl
normally I'd get serius on u & show up in ur hood to scrap...
but u'd prolly sucka punch a nigga... everyone knows all asians are good at Math
^seen this at leas 3 times last wk already. lost the impact for me
trag hit harder when he hit and he hit more. this wasn't onsided at all tho. des had some nice lines (t-mobile mighta been lotb), but i preferred trag's style here. others might see it differently, i got trag tho. good shit to both tho. cool read.
v/trag
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