mmmkay.... horrorcore is obv retarded, but Ima try to do this for yall....
From Nik I liked
Flash Dracula's teeth, taste the splash off the cheek, depending the blood type the rush could last for a week
No one madder than me, I have a fear fetish & the heart gives me a clear message wearing this ear necklace
My knife'll make this bitch here breastless only to make it this queer's breakfast
Make cannibals off just peer pressure, manually pull souvenir dentures my trophies are holy
Pyro smoking a stogie, mate Joanie with ponies, then starve em to death till they're lonely & boney
disliked: last 2 bars weren't as 'horrorcore-y' as the first part of ur verse... not as creative descriptions of what u would do...
from Bags I liked
Cut thru ur eyelids like hot butter w/ a boxcutter....
Then stab ur naked eye w/ the razors side & scream... LOOK AT ME COCKSUCKER
After my steel thrust, u could see........this is clear cut
But this kids brave, i dug in his ribcage w/ a switchblade......Talk about sheer guts.
Gotta dump ya body & Its No good shippin this cargo
After i get done youll be jealous of steve buscemi in that woodchipper from fargo
disliked: the 'can you hear me now?' was way too similar to the 'look at me cocksucker' ... it was like you came up with the opener and liked it so you followed the exact same recipe again.... zzzz
Points of difference in Bags favour were he had the one line with a wordplay which I dug (sheer guts), better rhythm and use of internal rhymes, & better humour
Points of difference in Niks favour were more and longer multis, better vocab, & slightly more creative 'horrors'
As to who was more 'horrorcore-y' overall... as I said Nik's better lines were the most creative of the battle eg dracula, joanie w ponies.... although the woodchipper from fargo line was good... but Nik also had sections where there was only a vague description of what he'd do eg last bar was pretty weak... wheras Bags was more focussed even through his set ups on vivid descriptions of what'd happen.... I have this category weighing neutrally overall which is lame since it's a horrorcore battle lol
This would've been so much better as a collab dropped in OM lol...
All in all close as shit....I think.... I mean I listed all the points of difference I could think of above but I don't know who I should vote for based on those... I guess I enjoyed Bags verse a little more, humour is a big one for me and even though it's not snf the rhythm of his verse aided how the lines impacted... I hate voting on shit when I don't have a strong feeling about who won, but I'm guessing all your potential voters are in the same boat... shit's been up for days without 1 vote lol that's ridic... hopefully they'll start coming now that the first one's done. Anyways good showing both of you
V/ Bags
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