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Old 10-01-2013, 04:04 AM   #15
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who thinks the verbal threats in his disses is amazing?
Ri actions couldn't be ground breaking- if the hulks fists is in the pavement
the reactions np is suuuupper played on him. You wouldn't know, being new... but yeah, this did nothing for me. It's a steep learning curve figuring out what's played and what's not when u first start... but you'll learn the hard way... a good rule of thumb though- if you're battling a guy who's been around a while, and the nameplay you think of is kinda obvious, then it'll be played. Ground breaking wp was better but still generic/played.
Ric been rhyme'n since 08 & he still can't acquire new raps? ouch!
guess you'll only be out-standing when I give you flyers to pass out
outstanding wp is old. And why would u be giving him flyers? need to link to something in the set up
these harsh statements'll expose what your fallacies appear to be
while the punches leave Theoryz spaced out like galaxy conspiracy's
this was your best line. I've seen/used spaced out wp before but still your best attempt
& being obsessed with pic battles got this vato ignored quick
beat me? you couldn't even stomach sharp- doing the swallowing sword trick
OK personal. Don't use links. No-one's clicking em. Just state that he lost in your set up
you entered a homo thread.. somethin a straight man never would do
then re-posted WhysWays? I guess you needed someone to measure up to!
no
you thought you was gonna get off easy, But ima flawless contender
stop me? you're barking up the wrong tree- like a dog with dementia
corny

Suggest you read verses from vets- see how their wp/np's are not obvious and generic. Also how they word their lines to be more harsh.



You'll duck once I spark the heat geek, this week i feel is a wrong freebie,
Cuz If Ur punches have to EXplain them selfs it'll look worser than u at night listening to drake album on repeat.
nah
Ur a fag dont like gettin laid i suggest u clean up & take it Easy on the broom,
Ironic Ur name has 'fuck' in the middle & that's the least thing u attempt when there's pussy in the room.
cool... obvious but it was an OK punch
It's Odd See, the way u denied our pic battle is gonna cost B,
Cuz the fact ur ugly n bossy makes me think u got the type of mug that only retired veterans carry with like two drops of dry coffee.
wording is awful but concept is OKish.... wp's not fresh but with the personal it's alright
Wrinkled faggot. Stop acting like u can compete with vets,
U have this obsession with breaking bad so much I'm starting to question your close relationship with Meth.
decent... would've been better with a set up linking him and meths relationship
Peep the predictions we all know who's better, I'm spittin personals that are clever,
Cuz When it comes to you winning voters know it'll be a strikt process meaning you'll actually be waitin forever.
OK idea, could've been worded better

Is English your first language? "look worser", "least thing u attempt" ....
You would be much better if you could get some sense of rhythm happening. Generally, your second line is just way too long...


U both have a long way to go.... enjoyed unfuckwithable's more though.


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